Same list, same words as yesterday.
A few tips:
1. Take the same words down a different path, a different persona, a different poem.
2. Envision a slightly altered version of yesterday’s experience, a different point of view.
3. Extend yesterday’s poem, expand it, or enhance it.
Today’s list was taken from a poem that may be found here:
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2009/01/05/canto/
Thanks for participating and have a great day!
I’ve used a few more of your words, to the Poetic Bloomings prompt!
Cinqku
Language
as a means
by which we find
common ground with others ~
magic
language
so arranged
to make beauty,
written or said aloud:
poem
Language
turned around
into weapon
insult, cruelty, harm –
crime
I also put a rant about ultra-short-line-poetry on my blog: http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com/2014/04/02/lineation-plea-napo-2/ after ploughing through the hundreds of comments at Poetic Asides.
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I have honestly not heard of a cinqku. I like the flow of yours, and the message. Language is everything.
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neither had I until I found it on one of the prompt sites. I can’t remember which – in too much of a poetic whirl! 2-3-4-6-2 syllable count was the recipe.
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It was Freud who said that words have power and magic. You prove it here, and add wisdom to the list…
Elizabeth
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The last line should be “a crime” !
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Here’s my Day 2 piece:
http://undercaws.com/2014/04/02/lala/
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A continuation:
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2014/04/02/sorcerer-2/
Elizabeth
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#1: NaPoWriMo Day 1 on Day 2
Note: I think I will be a little out of order…..
http://somethingsithinkabout-annell-annell.blogspot.com/2014/04/april-2-2014-1-napowrimo-language-and.html
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Not to worry about order, do whatever you need to do. And I edited your URL. The one you put up wasn’t working…sorry.
Elizabeth
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